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Smile for the camera

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This is that thing I've been doing on livestream for the past few dayssss
and as requested, I added pinstripes to Jaden's clothes...picky bastard
jkjk, you know I love ya
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Oh well I haven't done one of these in a very long time. So excuse the um.possible cruelt

Negative
Well the first thing I notice is the nose. So stubby and it bothers me quite a lot. No matter what angel you go at a nose will never look like that. It would have more to it, not so much like a point, but a smoothend rock. And one other thing is how you can see the eyes through the hair! I know it shows emotion but I hate that, and I think the hair should just cover it. And Amber's mouth doesn't quite match up with the other side and it has no colour in it! And it somewhat looks like Jaden is grabbing his crotch xD. The background needs some colour,most picture boothes are black or a dark shade of red.

Positive
Now I had put down the background, but you made it look like they are actually sitting on it instead of it being a box. And it doesn't look like it's part of the wall. And the detail on the clothes...wow! It is absulutly amazing! And the hair..God,you are just amazing at detail!