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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is a nice drawing, Rain. But I noticed something that keeps bugging me. On the body you fluffed her up more than the head, so unless her head is slightly shaved I think you should fix that xD and also, if her tail is THAT big, then she should have long fur all around her body, not just there. Unless shes designed to have short fur everywhere but the tail. I noticed the fingers making the peace sign and short and look a bit rushed, I would make them longer since this is an anthro position.

Where the inside of the ear meets the outside, you should smudge it a bit more. The ear is a very fluffy part of a cat.

Also, notice how her chest fluff looks a bit tight and.. misplaced? I think the fur there should be a bit messier, and a bit longer. And smoothly let the shape curve into the rest of the body, it looks as if its just plopped down there.

The lighting on the hair is a bit.. messy. I think it should be smudged or motion blurred to go along with the strains of hair going down her face, not just a blob right on there

Sorry if this is harsh a critique is a critique. YOUR FAEC FR DINNR